My 10th short story
My latest short story is called “The Face At The Window”. Please give it a read and let me know what you think.
Now that work has resumed after the summer break, I’m likely to complete fewer stories that I managed over the summer but, since I’m now attending a course, they might become better.
September 27th, 2009 at 10:53 pm
I think “The Face at the Window” is a really haunting story and conveys superbly the inside experience of bereavement.
Story is brilliant. Why don’t you submit it to a magazine?
You have an amazing range of voices.
Really enjoyed it – very memorable.
September 29th, 2009 at 12:58 pm
Oh my goodness – good job I’m not a sentimental old cry baby, what a weepie!
September 30th, 2009 at 3:04 pm
Was just reading your new story today – you’ve quite a consistent voice… the one about the dead daughter was really good… and I’m surprised to see that you have a moment of serendipity in your transformational stories…. are we on the same page after all?!!!!!!