My seventh short story
The ideas keep flowing and so today I publish my seventh short story entitled “A Moment In Time”.
Like the others, it’s different from previous stories, so please check it out and let me know what you think.
The ideas keep flowing and so today I publish my seventh short story entitled “A Moment In Time”.
Like the others, it’s different from previous stories, so please check it out and let me know what you think.
September 7th, 2009 at 9:52 pm
Have today during my lunchtime scanned your three (!) most recent stories that I have otherwise missed. I shall read them properly later but I thought that ‘Moment in Time’ in particular was excellent.
I hope you enjoy the course – you certainly look to have the raw material with which to approach it with confidence.
September 15th, 2009 at 6:23 pm
Your short stories all have interesting twists and deal with a wide variety of scenarios. I am enjoying them.
The subject of ‘A Moment in Time’ is quite challenging but I do think ‘The Dinner Party’ really would make a good TV drama.
September 27th, 2009 at 12:09 pm
Oh my goodness! Did guess from the description of the nervous young man – presumably this was intentional – jolly gripping as the story continued.
A teeny bit of confusion perhaps at the very end about which ‘he’ was being referred to – again, this may have been intentional.
December 31st, 2010 at 12:09 am
More temptation! Yikes. I looked at the one called A Moment in Time – intense, visual, dark.
I must practice a bit of self-discipline, for I am a dedicated reader, and easily distracted by good stories away from work!
Reading your stories will be my reward for finishing this project, which is due at the first of next week.